What Writers Can Learn from Charles Schulz

By now, you’ve probably seen Linus tell Charlie Brown what Christmas is all about, seen Snoopy reunite with his brother Spike, and felt empathy for poor Rerun who is probably still stuck on that bike. For many, it’s tradition to watch the Charlie Brown Christmas Specials every year. And for many, it is the only medium where Schulz’s work is still consumed. But the great cartoonist didn’t start off making classic television specials. In 1950, when he was just two years younger than me (27) he sold his first strip of Peanuts. According to David Michaelis in the first volume of The Complete Peanuts, “At the peak of Schulz’s popularity, Peanuts captured three hundred and fifty-five million readers, and the merchandising of the brand created a franchise unlike any the funny papers had ever known, with the cartoonist himself earning from $30 million to $40 million a year.” So take that kite out of the tree, play some soft jazz in the background, and cuddle up with a warm puppy. It’s time to talk about what writers can learn from Charles Schulz.

Characters

As writers for children, what better cast of characters to learn from than the iconic Peanuts gang? Charlie Brown, Snoopy, Linus, Lucy, Pig Pen, Schroeder, Peppermint Patty, and Marcie. The first and most obvious lesson Charles Schulz can teach us is about characters. While editors warn us about having children in our stories as adults in disguise, let us appreciate the genius of Schulz who makes children think like adults. They never offered lessons to each other (except for perhaps the previously mentioned Christmas scene), but instead they all wanted to be little adults. Charlie Brown is melancholy yet wants to be great. Linus was precocious, yet still literally clung to his security blanket. Schroder played sophisticated classical music…on his children’s play piano. Not only are these characters unique, but they all have depth to them. A certain twist of irony. A dog is the best baseball player. Lucy wants to be sweet and lovely, but she can cut you down by word or fist. It is important to remember that while adults can look at children’s problems as miniscule or simple, children don’t feel this way. A child can feel as deep of betrayal as an adult can. Kids have big feelings they need to process, and they usually process them by talking to their peers. Which is why Lucy’s advice stand is making a killing. While we should try to encourage children to listen to adults, we all know deep down that when adults talk, all children hear is, “Wah wah wah wah.”

Condensed storytelling

Something else we can learn from Schulz is condensed storytelling. Think you need hundreds of pages to tell a story? Think again. Most Peanuts strips are three panels, with just a few words if necessary. At over 17,000 strips over almost 5 decades, Peanuts is either the longest graphic novel ever, or it is a long-running series of short stories. I tend to believe the latter because you can pop into any strip, no matter what came before or after, and still get the joke. Because the story works on its own. Take this panel for example. In just 28 words, Schulz tells one of the funniest jokes ever. For a cartoonist, Schulz was competing against a short attention span among readers. There was plenty of other strips to read, not to mention the sports section, headlines, features, politics, obituaries, etc. Sound familiar? Our entire social media feeds are just like the newspapers of old, each section trying their hardest to get your attention. If you want a child to pick up your story and see it through to the end, be concise. Be hilarious. Be like Schulz.

No angels allowed

While many of the Peanuts gang are cute, it is important to remember one tiny detail: they can all be a bit rude. While we laugh off insults like “blockhead” Schulz let his kids be kids. They were imperfect. Sometimes selfish, mean, and violent. Now I’m not saying they are brats, but they have their flaws. Which makes them all the more lovable. Many children in stories today are disrespectful, crude, and downright naughty. While you shouldn’t make your characters like Gregg Hefley or George and Herald from Captain Underpants, you should also be careful to remove that halo above your characters. Because no one ever learned a lesson by doing what was right the first time around. Sadly, we as humans learn from our mistakes. So don’t be afraid to have your characters lose their temper, get the blues, or threaten to slug someone. Just make sure they have redeeming qualities in the end. Good grief!

What is your favorite moment from the Charlie Brown specials? My mom’s favorite, is “I wasn’t made for winter!”

Let me know in the comments below!

Just like his two older brothers, Kyle Morgan was homeschooled from Kindergarten through High School. When he is not busy writing, the next classic children’s book, Kyle loves spending time with his family, all things baseball, and watching black and white movies. He is a monthly contributor to Write2Ignite where he blogs about writing for children. His work has appeared in The Old Schoolhouse Magazine, The Caldwell Perspective and StarLight Magazine. You can check out his Facebook page or follow him on Instagram.

Author Interview: The Incredibly Amazing and Magical Flying Chair

Book Cover for the Incredibly Amazing and Magical Flying Chair

This week on Write2Ignite, we’re excited to have Nancy Rechtman and Bob Shumaker with us to discuss their new book, The Incredibly Amazing and Magical Flying Chair.

Nancy Machlis Rechtman worked for years as a tutor for elementary-school-age children focusing on enhancing reading and writing skills. She’s had stories published in a number of children’s magazines, most notably several in Highlights Magazine for Children, as well as having her work appear in various literary journals and anthologies.  She has also had several children’s plays and musicals produced and published.

Bob Shumaker, author of thirteen books, was raised in Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio, and now lives in Simpsonville, South Carolina, with his wife, Sharon. He retired early from his sales and marketing company to focus on one of his lifelong passions: writing. His ‘Schmooney’ character was selected as the prestigious ‘South Carolina State Mascot for Literacy’ and was also named the ‘City Mascot of Simpsonville, South Carolina’.

Thank you for joining us today, Nancy and Bob!

To start us off, I’d love to know, what is your favorite part of the writing process? 

Nancy: I love when the writing flows after the initial planning and research process. When it feels natural, and it all starts coming together and you know you got it right. It’s a combined feeling of relief and triumph that you finally hit on all the right ingredients in all the right proportions, like baking a delicious cake that you know everyone is going to enjoy.

Bob:  The creativity flow, or dump, is my favorite part. I thoroughly enjoy dumping ideas and dialogue into a document on the computer and then watching the direction it takes.  The process of developing raw ideas and converting them into reality.  An idea that evolves into something real.  How exhilarating! I’m painting a scene with words that requires undivided attention and all life’s distractions fade away.  It’s very peaceful and extremely rewarding…giving life to an idea.

So what idea inspired your newest book, The Incredibly Amazing and Magical Flying Chair?

Nancy: Since this was Bob’s fantastic idea and I’ve been lucky enough to come along for the ride, I’ll let him answer this question.

Bob:  Thank you.  One of our favorite points when we talk to students about reading is that ‘a book is the second-fastest thing in the universe’.  It will take you anywhere you want to go in a matter of seconds.  I not only believe that point, but I also experience it daily.  If you want to go to Egypt…then go!  You don’t need a plane.  Go open a book, and there are plenty of them, and visit Egypt from the comfort of your favorite chair. Reading is so powerful.  I wanted to share my experiences about the benefits of reading, so I decided to create a story around that concept. 

It’s definitely a fun and engaging story! I love how much your main character, Noah, enjoys learning about new places and cultures in this book. If you could visit any place in the world using Noah’s magic chair, where would you go?

Nancy: That’s a tough one because I love to travel and there are so many places I’d still like to see. So, I’d say Australia and New Zealand as my first trip in the magic chair with more to come since there’s so much I want to see there and it would be great to get there so quickly!

Bob:  Egypt.  Not only present day, but Ancient Egypt.  I love learning about Ancient Egypt.  Babylonia is considered the ‘cradle of civilization’…I believe it’s actually Egypt.  There are so many secrets just waiting to be discovered.

All of those places would be exciting to see! Another aspect of The Incredibly Amazing and Magical Flying Chair that I enjoyed was your wonderful cast of characters. Which character was your favorite to write?

Nancy: Having worked with kids for much of my adult life, I loved writing Noah’s teacher, Ms. Rushmore. She is smart and savvy and compassionate. Nothing gets past her, but she makes it clear that she cares about these kids and is willing to do what it takes to help them succeed as long as they meet her halfway. She won’t put up with nonsense. And she finds creative ways to solve problems. She has all the traits that great teachers should have.

Bob:  Noah, because I relate to Noah very well.  My father left when I was ten, as did Noah’s.  I had to figure things out for myself, as did Noah.  Noah goes through a similar process as I did.  He wonders why people left him.  He feels alone.  But, as they say, what doesn’t kill you, makes you stronger…and Noah will continue to  gain strength.  As any reader of our book will realize, this is a journey for Noah.  One that will reward him with the answers to the questions that he has been asking…and much more!

Speaking of Noah’s journey, an important theme in this story is honesty and not trying to change who you are to fit in. Why do you think this is such an important topic for kids today?

Nancy: I think our world has a lot of shades of gray these days that can be very confusing for kids. It’s hard enough for adults to navigate all the morally ambiguous parts of our lives with certainty and I think we all crave role models who stand firm and true in their beliefs. Not that we shouldn’t be able to bend when the circumstances call for it because not everything is always absolutely one way or another. But we all need a moral center to set our compass at. And we need to be proud of who we are and our uniqueness.

Bob:  Well said, Nancy.  I would add that we are made the way we are for a reason.  Each of us have been given gifts.  Go discover your gifts.  Each of us has been given abilities and some of those abilities are unique.  We need to discover those gifts and then use them to help ourselves and help those around us.  Why change who we are?  Just develop yourself based on your abilities.  As for honesty.  Without truth and honesty, what are we?

Switching gears slightly, can you tell us a little about the coauthoring process?

Nancy: I usually write alone, but working over the years with Bob has been such a pleasure and has opened up my writing process to a whole new way of creating. We each write separately, but check in with each other as we’re going and suggest changes, additions, things that might work better, a new direction for certain scenes, etc. At times, one of us does a complete rewrite and then we discuss, and the other does the next rewrite. The biggest challenge is when we’re both sure we’re right about something but we’re not in agreement about what the right thing is. We have found that if we talk it out and explain our position to each other, we have always been able to not only come to an agreement, but what we end up with is much better than what each of us had tried on our own.

Bob: Writing is a lonely ordeal. Think about it. Stephen King says the first thing a potential author needs is a room with a door and a lock.  You need to be alone so you can dump your ideas on paper, then go back and assemble them into what you imagined. You share your inner feelings with the world when you publish a book.  That’s the end of the process.  But the whole world doesn’t see what you went through to get to that end.  That is a very personal journey.  When you have a writing partner, you expose yourself totally to that person. They see what you go through…your thoughts…your mind…they see your soul. So, writing with a partner is very much like a marriage.  And that is the biggest challenge.  Discovering successful compatibility is very hard to find.

So tell us, what can readers expect in the sequel?

Nancy: The funny thing is, this started as a one and done story. But as we finally felt we were done, after a great deal of writing and rewriting over a period of close to two years, we had made it a whole new story and were both happy with it. And then Bob and I talked some more and he said that he felt it should be a trilogy. I was slightly surprised, but not really, because I didn’t want to let it go either. But that meant we needed to change the ending. So we did. And we’ve talked about what we’d like to have happen in the next two books in broad terms. Of course, there will be much more of the Magic Chair and the characters you’ve come to know and love. And more magic, excitement, travel, mystery, and twists and turns. Bob can tell you more.

Bob:  I’d love to tell you, but I’m sworn to secrecy.  Book 2 is shaping up to provide our readers with a great deal of adventure for our characters.  The situations they will face will make you laugh and wonder, and you will feel like you are there experiencing each turn with them. We will introduce some bad guys who don’t play fair.  We will be traveling to places that are exotic, dangerous, and very interesting.  Our characters will continue to develop into more complex and likeable people worth reading about. It should be very exciting.

I’ll definitely be looking forward to it! As we wrap up, what is one piece of advice or encouragement you would give to fellow children’s book writers?

Nancy: I have one word for anyone who writes – persistence. If you give up, your story ends up in a drawer or a computer file that no one will ever see. No matter how much rejection you face, keep trying. And take the feedback you get to heart if the suggestions are valid, then keep rewriting until you feel there is nothing else to change. And then keep sending it out into the world. Believe in yourself and give readers a reason to believe in you, too.

Bob:  I agree with Nancy but let me add another piece of advice. The first piece of advice is to read. We learn through reading. Writers develop their own style by reading other writers’ works. Read as often as you can. The second piece of advice echoes Nancy. Rejection is everywhere. You can’t avoid it. So, prepare for it and deal with it. Try not to let rejection dampen your initiative.  Be persistent.  Thank you for listening and please be sure to read The Incredibly Amazing and Magical Flying Chair.  We would love to hear your comments.

Thank you for joining us, Bob and Nancy!

To learn more about The Incredibly Amazing and Magical Flying Chair, you can find the book on Amazon here.

Book Review: The First Unicorn by Kathleen J. Shields

“And the unicorns shall come down with them, and the bullocks with the bulls; and their land shall be soaked with blood, and their dust made fat with fatness.” (Isaiah 34:7 KJV)

If you ever come across this verse in the King James Bible, it might give you some pause. Unicorns and blood? In Isaiah? What is going on here? While it is important to note that King James is the only version that calls these creatures unicorns, it does beg the question, “What creature was Isaiah talking about? Rhino’s? Wild One-horned Oxen? How did the unicorn legend even start?” If you ask my Grandmother, she’ll tell you that the unicorns got their horns stuck in a tree on the way to the ark and that’s why you don’t see them anymore.

The First Unicorn is a picture book written in verse by Kathleen J. Shields with illustrations by Aashay Utkarsh, and it tries to answer these questions. You see in this story, unicorns aren’t mythical creatures who have names that sound like ice cream flavors and are all about rainbows and friendship. Nor did God create unicorns alongside horses, but instead gave horses unicorn horns as a reward for their kindness and good behavior.

Plot Summary

The book begins thousands of years ago in an unnamed land, where there is a herd of selfish horses. They are sinful creatures who only think about themselves. Well, everyone but Aden. Aden is a colt with a kind heart who likes to put other’s needs before his own. While most unicorn stories are about girl unicorns, I found it refreshing to see a story about a boy unicorn. This is no mistake. Aden is meant to be a Christ-like figure in this story. While he does not lay down his life for others, he does display many fruits of the spirit including love, gentleness, and goodness. The story itself is very episodic, with Aden helping out different animals throughout the land and protecting smaller creatures by chasing away their predators.

But things really change when an angel appears to Aden in the form of a bright light! The angel says that God has been watching Aden and is pleased with him. He wants to give him a gift: the unicorn horn. This horn has special powers, and Aden uses it for good. The story takes a dark turn toward the end when a wolf shows up and kills Aden’s mother. Parents of small children should be aware that there is blood in some of these illustrations but have no fear. Aden uses the unicorn horn that God gave him to heal his mother and bring her back to life! The book ends with Aden using his powers for good to help other animals, with a verse from Joshua to close out the book.

Joshua 1:9 “Have I not commanded you? Be strong and courageous. Do not be frightened,

and do not be dismayed, for the Lord your God is with you wherever you go.”

Final Thoughts

This is a short, 48-page story with colorful illustrations and a rhyming scheme. My niece loves unicorns, but after a disastrous viewing of Lion King, I decided to hold back on this story and wait a few more years. That being said, there are some good lessons here about putting others before yourself, even if you are the only one around doing that. It also shows how your Father in Heaven sees what you are doing and will reward you. Some may be skeptical of a Biblical God giving a mythical creature magic powers. But the story is all about how God rewards good behavior. And that’s a pretty good message for the kiddos!

Just like his two older brothers, Kyle Morgan was homeschooled from Kindergarten through High School. When he is not busy writing, the next classic children’s book, Kyle loves spending time with his family, all things baseball, and watching black and white movies. He is a monthly contributor to Write2Ignite where he blogs about writing for children. His work has appeared in The Old Schoolhouse Magazine, The Caldwell Perspective and StarLight Magazine. You can check out his Facebook page or follow him on Instagram.

Be an Author – Do One Thing

Do you have dreams of being an author? Specifically, you may feel a calling from God to write for children. I challenge you to do one thing this summer. Pick something from the list below. Do one thing.

  • Attend a writers conference.
  • Join a critique group.
  • Subscribe to a journal for writers.
  • Spend 30 minutes sitting in the children’s section of a bookstore.DoOneThing
  • Follow a writing blog.
  • Have a conversation with a children’s minister about books that should be written.
  • Spend two hours a week writing.
  • Check out the new books in the children’s section of the library.
  • Volunteer to work with kids (church, library, community organization).
  • Have coffee or lunch with a children’s author.

What choices would you add to the list?

Many blessings on you and your desire to serve God through writing.

Carol